first draft/ evaluation

First Draft Evaluation

First draft Evaluation

we asked others to view our film to get some feedback, we found out that the audience who viewed our thriller thought that the beginning of the thriller was a little jumpy, however they said the audio and the actual storyline was very interesting and it fitted in well together therefore we re-edited the start to make sure it fitted together and the shots were in logical order in doing so this improved our thriller where we could have made silly mistakes.